Friday, May 18, 2007

One Last Revision

Donald was kind enough to toss together and send me this rework of the composition and I thought I would share it... It's impressive to see a few changes really strengthen the image - I would rework the actual image but I sadly accidentally saved over the high resolution version and I'm just too lazy to change the lighting around.

From Donald's mail:

"i know that this is changing the whole composition, but i was trying to keep the viewer stay within the picture frame. therefore, the main character facing inwards, his pointy finger almost center in the whole frame, the dragon facing inwards. i also felt that his pony tail should at least touch the top of the frame, adding mystery to the open sky behind it, keeping his razor sharp spear off and away from the dragon's head/neck. darken the main character and have the background and the secondary items like the chest and dragon not 'compete' with the main character...forgive me if this conflicts with the story....."

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